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999 Roses - ManhLeQuan Fan Fiction! CHAPTER 2 UPDATED!!! - 7/9/2007 9:45:35 PM

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This will be the thread for discussing about the latest chapters and news of the fan fic!
It's coming soon but here's a poster of most of the characters that's appearing
Note: The one in between LTQ and Ron Ng is KY DUYEN!

Also sorry if you will feel offended in the fan fic but Thuy Tien will be the evil one!!

< Message edited by ManhLeQuan -- 7/22/2007 5:24:31 PM >

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RE: 999 Roses - ManhLeQuan Fan Fiction! - 7/11/2007 6:25:26 PM

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*Note there is Minh Tuyet!!!

It was usually very cold in the city of Melbourne, a crowd had shuffled inside the Flinders Street Station to be able to get on a train. Cindi entered the old station all shivering even when she wore her black cardigan she still felt the cold air running through her body. Cindi looked up on the television which showed all the times the train was coming. "The Train should be here anytime now," said Cindi. She dug her hand through her pocket and picked up her cell phone, opened it and called back "****o Mum, I'm running a bit late today because the train hasn't arrived yet... okay bye," Cindi closed her cell phone and put it back in her pocket.

As the train finally came Cindi entered the train and sat on an empty seat on the left looking through the window. The door closed and beeped twice, the train moved. Cindi hummed for a while waiting for the train to arrive Footscray, her home town. When the train arrived at the Parliment station, A dozen people walked in the carriage with coats and cardigans. "Hey is this seat taken?" said a female voice. Cindi looked up it was a female Vietnamese lady with brown curls and a huge grin "Oh my gosh Cindi! Long time no see,"
    "Tuyet!" screamed Cindi. Everyone on the carriage turned stared at Cindi, Cindi then acted as if she was hiding in a turtle shell. "Sorry" she whispered. Tuyet laughed out loud. the train started to move.
    "No need to feel embarrassed, you were just excited to see me," said Tuyet. Tuyet sat next to Cindi, Cindi got out of her cardigan breathing in the fresh air. "So Cindi, where have you been these past few years?"
    "You know just studying and stuff," said Cindi "I am too busy to even go out. How about you?"
    "I see... ever since I dropped out of University, I have been at home helping dad out with the gift shop." said Tuyet.
    "Is it the same gift shop?" asked Cindi "The one next to the ANZ bank?" Tuyet nodded. "He hasn't moved since,"
    "Hey Cindi, do you still see him?" asked Tuyet there was a sudden silence all that was heard was the traib moving     "No,I broke up with him a long time ago," said Cindi "He's no longer in my life I want to forget about him but I can't"
    "So he's basically like superglue," said Tuyet metaphorically. Cindi sighed, Tuyet patted on Cindi's back "Hey, don't worry. Soon when you find someone else, you will forget about him." After the conversation, the train stopped at Kensington Station "Well I got to go Cindi... see ya," Tuyet waved and left, Cindi looked at the window and waved back. It has been a while since Cindi remembered about him but it stayed in the past. He no longer existed in Cindi's world his smile was one of the best features Cindi remembered and his romantic eyes and spiky fringed hair was the only features she loved about him. It was not when Cindi caught him cheating and making love to another woman.

    Suddenly there was the Nokia ringtone ringing close by. Cindi heard the ringtone but thought it was another passenger but instead her chair had softly vibrated and ringing at the same time... Cindi's eyes slowly looked next to her and to Cindi's suprise it was Tuyet's Nokia 6610i. Cindi grabbed the phone and rushed outside. "TUYET, TUYET!" she screamed as she sped outside "TUYET, TUYET, TUY-" She tripped over and fell on the footpath.
    "Hey, watch where you're tripping!" said a deep male voice. Cindi looked up a Bosco Wong and Ron Ng look alike (Huy Vu) was above her wearing a black hoodie and jeans.
    "Um... sorry," Cindi embarassly said as she stood up.
    "Well don't ever run in that cardigan again.... it's a horrible sight," said the guy. Cindi nodded and she ran off.
    "What a wierdo," muttered Cindi. Then suddenly as she reached the ticket box Chuga Chuga Chuga Chuga, the train was moving Cindi turned and watched in disbelief "WAIT TRAIN STOP!" it was too late the train had already left the station. Cindi walked outside the train station onto the footpath and looked in front of her... two women were standing with their hands crosed wearing a red and a green qipao (chinese dress).
    "We were waiting for you," said the women.

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RE: 999 Roses - ManhLeQuan Fan Fiction! - 7/22/2007 5:46:50 PM

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Chapter 2

"Waiting for me?" asked Cindi as she approached them "But I don't even know you,"
"You should know me... I'm Hwa Hwa," said the female with the red qipao as she played with her brown curls.
"And I'm Bell," said the female with the green qipao and red single layered hair "We were known as the China Dolls,"
"Yeah what ever now look... I am very busy at the moment so I have no time to chit-chat with you," said Cindi "So could you please move?"
"Yeah, but hey do you know where the nearest apartment would be?" asked Bell
"Apartment?" asked Cindi
"Yeah we just arrived from Thailand," said Hwa Hwa.
"In those qipaos," asked Cindi as she pointed at the dresses that Hwa Hwa and Bell were wearing.
"No silly... we're just wearing this for... unknown... reasons," said Hwa Hwa as she trailed off Cindi laughed "but hey could you help us?"
"Yeah sure just come with me while I give this mobile phone to a friend of mine," said Cindi "But the bad thing is that I'm kinda lost myself..." Bell cringed. "Well the train left me,"
"Just like a boyfriend, they leave you pretty quickly," laughed Hwa Hwa. No one else laughed. As they were speaking Tuyet approached Cindi.
"Hey Cindi... why are you here? the train left minutes ago," said Tuyet
"Yeah I know, I had to give your phone back," said Cindi "and then I missed the train,"
"Oh I see, and who are these two?" asked Tuyet "Friends?"
"Yeah... this is Hwa Hwa and Bell," said Cindi.
"Nice to meet you," said Tuyet "Hey Cindi how about if you call a taxi to take you home,"
"Yeah... but what about these two, they need somewhere to live," said Cindi
"Well, they can go to my house and stay there. I need company," said Tuyet. Bell and Hwa Hwa cheered happily. Tuyet and Cindi giggled.

[2:00 PM Airport]
"I told you this wasn't Hong Kong," said Myolie "What do you have to say for yourself!" Myolie Wu and Ron Ng were outside the airport waiting for a Taxi.
"Hey hey... Myolie, it wasn't my fault that we ended up here," said Ron "Now I have cancel all my conferences," Myolie growled
"Good, cancel them..." growled Myolie "Now let's find a taxi... stupid Airline,"
"Gee... no wonder you don't have a boyfriend yet," said Ron. Myolie stopped growling and started to whimper like a puppy. Ron gave her a hug "There There.... Myolie it's alright, I was kidding," said Ron.
"But you didn't have to make me cry... I'm still single because I'm fat and ugly," Myolie cried
"No you're not," said Ron "Even if you are fat and Ugly some guy will find you and still love you for the person you are," Myolie smiled.
"Now do you want to stay in an apartment for the night or the month?" asked Ron as he finally released her from his hug.
“Yeah sure,” said Myolie.
“Hey you guys” yelled a voice from behind. It was Jennifer a Thai singer who was meant to have a tour at Hong Kong
“Hey Jennifer,” said Ron “You stranded here as well?”
“Yeah, but the good thing is my friends, Hwa Hwa and Bell are here in Melbourne,” said Jennifer “I should call them with my cell,”
“I don’t think you will get a response,” said Myolie “It’s all Optus and Telstra in this reigion,”
“Op...tus... Tel... Stra?” said Jennifer confusingly
“Myolie where did u get this information from?” asked Ron.
“at the airport,” said Myolie “They were giving all these pamphlets to all of the new people who arrived at this country,” Myolie passed a Optus brochure to Ron and the Telstra Brochure to Jennifer.
“Sim...card?” said Jennifer
“Big Pond?” asked Ron “Great Wall of China? To keep the rabbits out?”
"I don't know why that's there," said Myolie.
"Must be some trademark or something," said Ron. A yellow taxi had arrived at the parking lot. "Hey girls the taxi has arrived. Let's go," Ron and Myolie carried their luggage when the taxi-driver carried Jennifer's luggage which seemed like it weighed more than the plane.
"Jenny what's in there?" asked Myolie
"A cheetah," joked Jennifer "I'm kidding, Just cosmetics and stuff."
"All of that stuff is cosmetics?" asked Myolie "Where are your clothes?"
"In there with my cosmetics," said Jennifer
"Did you bring a plasma TV?" Ron joked
"Haha I wish." Jennifer laughed "But I did bring some of my CDs from Thailand. You guys can get all for free some have Chinese Mandarin in them"
“Oh but we speak Cantonese,” said Ron in realisation “But we’ll try to understand it,”
"We should listen to them," said Myolie "Did you bring a walkman by any chance?" Ron and Jennifer shook their heads. Myolie started to growl.

[3:00 PM Home]
Cindi opened the door of her little suburban house and snuck into her room like a little fourteen year old sneaking back in after her date. Passing the altar of the Buddha she arrived at her room slowly entering her room. "Cindi" yelled Cindi's mother (Ky Duyen) "Are you home yet?"
            "Yeah mum," said Cindi How did she know? Cindi then opened her wardrobe, it was one of those wardrobes which looks so much like a little mini room where you can walk in and play hide and seek. Cindi got coat hangers, changed to her pink Adidas tracksuits and tied her hair to a ponytail.
            "Cindi, Honey," said Ky Duyen knocking on the door "You hungry dear? I made noodles."
            "I'm not hungry mum.... um I just ate," said Cindi as she began to rummage through her clothes and sorting the skirts with the skirts.
            "Okay dear," said Ky Duyen. Cindi sighed and sorted her skirts.
            "Chocolate... pink.... red," Cindi whispered. Suddenly, something had ticked
            "Honey... it's over," Cindi started to think. It just couldn't stop, Cindi was still thinking about him. She thought that she was in a world where his face would pop up laughing and smiling at her in pity.
            "STOP IT STOP IT!" Cindi screamed blocking her ears, the lights flickered on and off!
            "Cindi" screamed Ky Duyen "What's wrong?" Cindi started to scream louder and louder.
            Then suddenly it all stopped. Cindi opened her eyes and found herself in the taxi in front of her house “It was all a dream,” Cindi sighed.

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